The Black Iron Emperor

The story's great. It's keeping my interest and has a good pacing. Most of the time, it's easy to read. But occasionally and for seemingly no reason, the chapter will be written in old English, or they'll use overly fancy words, and it takes the immersion out of the story for me. But outside of those instances, which honestly isn't that often, I love this read and would recommend it to anyone who's intrigued by the Synopsis.

I love this story it a nice change for bleach from the point of view. from Hueco Mundo and protagonists from bleach novels if Sōsuke Aizen is from Shinigami,Yhwach is from the Quincy and the mc can be from Hueco Mundo  that why I love it and the mc can develop a little confidence like Aizen Instead of being silly all the time .can't wait to read more chapters

just write as you wishyou don't have to care what other say I mean it's your first novel ... just earn some exp

Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running

              "Senior!" Said Zemin Yan cheerfully, though internally he was surprised that this warlord was in his living room.

"As you have seen from the job flyer we sent to Fairy Tail, this village used to be peaceful, the people here were happy, they never had anything to worry about because bandits and criminals don't usually come here. However, a few months ago, a dark guild invaded this town and situated themselves in the forest to the west. They stole our food, raped the women and took our profits. They also kidnapped people who tried to seek help, taking them hostage so that we wouldn't report them. The fact that I called your guild means that I risked my life for you to save us," the mayor stated sadly, looking like he was about to cry. This pulled on both the girls heartstrings, mentally promising that the dark guild would pay for their crimes. Natsu however, kept a poker face on, his mind running a thousand miles per hour, and the voices in his head started screaming louder and louder by the second.

Abhijeet says to himself:how can I see any women other than u, I loved even then and I love u even now none can replace u in my life and smiles

"Oh, Irina-chan then, "Zero said while catching Irina's hand for a handshake.